Wednesday, October 24, 2012

Independent Writing - Tioti



Room 4 have been practicing their writing goals. We would love it if you could help us by commenting on our writing. Please tell us if you think we have achieved our goal, and what else you think we can work on!
Thank you for listening to all of our stories.

3 comments:

Fiona Grant said...

Thanks Tioti, from your description of Fa'amanu he sounds like he would be a fun friend to spend time with.

brooklyn said...

oh tioti what nice blog

Anonymous said...

HI tioti its brooklyn just said that i liked your story and i just wanted to say that you're pretty good using enishitifs with your
thinking from your friend brooklyn=]