Wednesday, October 24, 2012

Independent Writing - Paige

Room 4 have been practicing their writing goals. We would love it if you could help us by commenting on our writing. Please tell us if you think we have achieved our goal, and what else you think we can work on!
Thank you for listening to all of our stories.

1 comment:

Fiona Grant said...

Thanks Paige, you used some good words to describe your treasure. I was a bit nervous that the children might not be able to escape the wicked pirates, I do like a happy ending.