Wednesday, October 24, 2012

Independent Writing - Mairangi



Room 4 have been practicing their writing goals. We would love it if you could help us by commenting on our writing. Please tell us if you think we have achieved our goal, and what else you think we can work on!
Thank you for listening to all of our stories.


1 comment:

Fiona Grant said...

Your story was fast paced, Mairangi, just like a speedy skateboard. I am sure your punctuation helped you when reading it aloud. The skateboard park sounds like a lot of fun!