Wednesday, October 24, 2012

Independent Writing - Willie



Room 4 have been practicing their writing goals. We would love it if you could help us by commenting on our writing. Please tell us if you think we have achieved our goal, and what else you think we can work on!
Thank you for listening to all of our stories.

1 comment:

Fiona Grant said...

You have used some excellent words to describe the scene Willie. It helped me imagine what it looked like after the eruption and what I might feel if I had been there.