Wednesday, October 24, 2012

Independent Writing - Siale



Room 4 have been practicing their writing goals. We would love it if you could help us by commenting on our writing. Please tell us if you think we have achieved our goal, and what else you think we can work on!
Thank you for listening to all of our stories.

1 comment:

Ms Hansell said...

Hello Siale, Thank you for your great writing which really shows you have achieved your goals.Your story most definitely made sense and I could hear where you had added in the correct punctuation. Congratulations from Ms Hansell