Independent Writing - Leeanne

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THE MAGIC PUMPKIN SOUP By Leeanne

Once upon a time there was a woman and a man and they had nothing to eat. They were starving. They became poorer and poorer because they couldn’t find any food.

Then one man broke his car because he was driving too fast – that’s why his car broke. When the old man saw the broken car he told the man to bring the broken car to the house. The old man fixed the car. “I fixed the car,” said the old man. The other man gave him a magic pumpkin pot and then drove away.

The old woman and the old man loved the magic pumpkin pot and they lived happily ever after eating pumpkin soup.