Independent Writing - Andre

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Photosynthesis - by Andre

I enjoyed learning about how trees give us oxygen and how the cycle of photosynthesis works.

THE THREE LITTLE WOLVES By Andre

Once upon a time there were three wolves. The three wolves decided to make their own house. They went and found the gear they wanted – mud, leaves and concrete. After they got the gear they were tired. They wanted to go to sleep. However, the three wolves heard about the mean fox that liked to eat wolves and lived in the forest so they stayed awake.

The first wolf made a house out of mud but the fox blew the house down. Then he ate the wolf. The wolf was happy because he had eaten. The next day the fox was hungry again. Next he went to the house of leaves. He blew down that house and ate the second wolf.

Then the mean fox went to the concrete house. He tried to blow down the concrete house but he couldn’t so he went to sleep. The third wolf crept outside and called his friends. His friends helped him to take the sleeping fox to the oven and they ate the mean fox! Then everyone lived happily ever after.