Friday, November 2, 2012

The Big Bad Wolf by Jacob


Once there lived three kids. Their house was like a rich house and the kids names  were Jay Jay, Tloti and Jovan. One day they were looking at the fire and they could see people in the fire. Suddenly  the floor turned into a forest and they saw three pigs. They ran after them. Jovan the little boy looked sad so Tloti said, "come  on".  They came to the pig’s house. All  of the  kids went in one house to tell the pigs that the big bad wolf was coming. The wolf  was sad because he didn't get to eat the pig’s.  The pigs thanked the kids for saving them from the bad wolf.  "Your house is behind that bush", they told the kids. They found their house and went home and lived happy ever after.

2 comments:

Sara Payne said...

Awesome story Jacob. Keep up the good work.

Anonymous said...

keep it up jacob i like it.and you also got capital letters and full stops.