Wednesday, September 5, 2012

RAINBLUE AND THE SEVEN GIRLS By Evelyn

Once upon a time there was a king and queen who had a cute baby called Rainblue. She had black hair and wore a dress that was pink with blue flowers. She had beautiful shoes of all different colours, socks and a cool hairstyle. One night Rainblue heard a sound – “Help! Help,” went the sound. It was the queen. Rainblue called her slaves to go and help the queen but it was too late. She was dead. The slaves buried the queen at the back of the castle.

After that day the king married another lady and she became the queen and Rainblue’s stepmother. The new queen hated Rainblue because she was so, so beautiful. The queen got jealous of Rainblue because she was so beautiful. The queen got her slaves to take Rainblue to the top of a mountain to kill her, but the slaves let Rainblue go.


Rainblue went into the forest to try to find a house to live in. When she was running past the trees she saw a cave with heaps of stuff inside. So she went inside the cave and then she saw seven plates with hot porridge in them and one glass of milk. Rainblue tried the first porridge but it was too cold. “I want a hot one,” she said. The second bowl was warm, the third bowl was ice-hard and the fourth one was cold. The fifth bowl was cold and the sixth bowl was yuck. The Seventh bowl was hot so she ate it. Then she found a bed and fell asleep on it. Then the seven girls came back from their work. They saw someone in the bed and it was a beautiful girl. They let her stay with them.
 
The queen found out that Rainblue was still alive, and she tried to kill Rainblue. The girls took Rainblue to the doctor and he gave her some medicine. Then the doctor and Rainblue looked into each other’s eyes and ran back to his castle to plan a wedding and get married. Finally everyone lived happily ever after.


2 comments:

Folauhola said...

Cool story,and love it,it is very long and I love the part when it was the last part.

RKELLY said...

Evelyn, as I was reading your story I was expecting a handsome prince to come but you surprised me with the doctor! Well done, you have used some great description!