After that day
the king married another lady and she became the queen and Rainblue’s
stepmother. The new queen hated Rainblue because she was so, so beautiful. The
queen got jealous of Rainblue because she was so beautiful. The queen got her
slaves to take Rainblue to the top of a mountain to kill her, but the slaves
let Rainblue go.
Rainblue went
into the forest to try to find a house to live in. When she was running past
the trees she saw a cave with heaps of stuff inside. So she went inside the
cave and then she saw seven plates with hot porridge in them and one glass of
milk. Rainblue tried the first porridge but it was too cold. “I want a hot
one,” she said. The second bowl was warm, the third bowl was ice-hard and the
fourth one was cold. The fifth bowl was cold and the sixth bowl was yuck. The
Seventh bowl was hot so she ate it. Then she found a bed and fell asleep on it. Then the seven
girls came back from their work. They saw someone in the bed and it was a
beautiful girl. They let her stay with them.
The queen found
out that Rainblue was still alive, and she tried to kill Rainblue. The girls
took Rainblue to the doctor and he gave her some medicine. Then the doctor and
Rainblue looked into each other’s eyes and ran back to his castle to plan a
wedding and get married. Finally everyone lived happily ever after.
2 comments:
Cool story,and love it,it is very long and I love the part when it was the last part.
Evelyn, as I was reading your story I was expecting a handsome prince to come but you surprised me with the doctor! Well done, you have used some great description!
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