Thursday, September 6, 2012

KATE AND JACKSON By Charlie-Ray

Once upon a time, a long time ago, there lived a girl and a boy. Their names were Kate and Jackson. They lived in a little cabin. Jackson had a hat on and he had a flower on it. Kate had a dress on that she could wear when she was cold. Kate said to Jackson, “I’m scared.” “Scared of what?” asked Jackson. “That mum and dad might want to go overseas and leave us in the forest to die,” said Kate.


One day their parents didn’t want them anymore because they wanted to go overseas. So the parents sent them into the forest. “What are we going to do now?” asked Kate. “I don’t know” said Jackson.

They came to a chocolate house and it looked yummy. Because they were so hungry they went and ate it then a witch came out and grabbed them. They screamed, “Help! Help”
 
The witch took the girl and boy inside the witch’s house. The witch put Jackson into a cell. He screamed and screamed.  Kate had to clean the toilet. The toilet looked like it was covered in mud.
 
Luckily Superman turned up. He saved Jackson and Kate. Superman took them to his mother’s house where they stayed and lived happily aver after.

1 comment:

RKELLY said...

Well done, Charlie-Ray.I wonder where the parents were going? That toilet sounds disgusting! Thank goodness for Superman!