Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts
Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts
Wednesday, July 30, 2014
Homework Excuses
Last week we read a great book about homework excuses, then we wrote our own. Demetrius has used go animate to publish his story and here it is.
Saturday, November 3, 2012
Lost in the Forest by Faamanu
Once upon a time there lived a nice and quiet family, Mum, Lucy, Dad and baby George. They lived in a wooden house with a
big giant clock.The clock always went tic toc tic toc. One night
mum was reading a story to the family near the fireplace. The book
she was reading was called, Little Red Ridding Hood. When she was
reading the story the house started turning into a forest with a wolf
standing near a river.
Mum said “what’s wrong with our house?” Dad said “why are trees in our wooden house?” “Oh no!” shouted George.”Lets get out of here!” said Lucy.The family got lost in the forest.”How do we get out of here?” said Dad.
The family were searching their way out of the forest when they met a little girl called Little Red Riding Hood. The girl was so small and she was holding a picnic basket.”This girl looks similar to the girl in a book,” said Lucy.
“Hi my name is Little Red Riding Hood” said the girl.
“Hey she is Little Red Riding Hood in the story” said Lucy!
"Help me, there's a wolf coming to eat me” replied Little Red. The wolf has sharp teeth and sharp claws and big muscles. "Can you help me," asked Little Red.”
"Ok," said mum, "but if we help you would you help us?”
"Ok," said Little Red. When Little Red got home with Lucy’s family she saw her Grandma wrapped up inside the closest. The wolf jumped out of nowhere and tried to eat Lucy and Little Red.
“Give me your picnic basket” roared the wolf.
“No!” shouted Little Red and she threw the picnic basket to Lucy. Lucy ran to the wolf and whacked his head with the picnic basket and the wolf fell on the ground.
“Are you going to help us or not” asked the mother.
“Come with me and I will show you the way out of this place” said Little Red. Here is the place to help you get out of this spooky forest.
“This is a cave”, said Dad.
“Come on” shouted Mum. “Let’s go”.
The cave was spooky and so dark. Lucy ran inside and broke her ankle on a rock. Lucy felt hurt and she cried out loud to her Dad. So dad had to carry her all the way home.
“Are you forgetting someone?" asked Little Red. "Can me and my grandma came with you?"
“Sure you can" said mum.
So they got out of the forest and they had a picnic and they lived happy ever after.
Mum said “what’s wrong with our house?” Dad said “why are trees in our wooden house?” “Oh no!” shouted George.”Lets get out of here!” said Lucy.The family got lost in the forest.”How do we get out of here?” said Dad.
The family were searching their way out of the forest when they met a little girl called Little Red Riding Hood. The girl was so small and she was holding a picnic basket.”This girl looks similar to the girl in a book,” said Lucy.
“Hi my name is Little Red Riding Hood” said the girl.
“Hey she is Little Red Riding Hood in the story” said Lucy!
"Help me, there's a wolf coming to eat me” replied Little Red. The wolf has sharp teeth and sharp claws and big muscles. "Can you help me," asked Little Red.”
"Ok," said mum, "but if we help you would you help us?”
"Ok," said Little Red. When Little Red got home with Lucy’s family she saw her Grandma wrapped up inside the closest. The wolf jumped out of nowhere and tried to eat Lucy and Little Red.
“Give me your picnic basket” roared the wolf.
“No!” shouted Little Red and she threw the picnic basket to Lucy. Lucy ran to the wolf and whacked his head with the picnic basket and the wolf fell on the ground.
“Are you going to help us or not” asked the mother.
“Come with me and I will show you the way out of this place” said Little Red. Here is the place to help you get out of this spooky forest.
“This is a cave”, said Dad.
“Come on” shouted Mum. “Let’s go”.
The cave was spooky and so dark. Lucy ran inside and broke her ankle on a rock. Lucy felt hurt and she cried out loud to her Dad. So dad had to carry her all the way home.
“Are you forgetting someone?" asked Little Red. "Can me and my grandma came with you?"
“Sure you can" said mum.
So they got out of the forest and they had a picnic and they lived happy ever after.
Friday, November 2, 2012
The Big Bad Wolf by Jacob
Once
there lived three kids. Their house was like a rich house and the kids names were Jay Jay, Tloti and Jovan. One day they were looking at the fire and they could see people in the fire. Suddenly the floor turned into a forest
and they saw three pigs. They ran after them. Jovan the little boy looked
sad so Tloti said, "come on". They came to the pig’s house. All of the
kids went in one house to tell the pigs that the big bad wolf was
coming. The wolf was sad because he didn't get to eat the pig’s. The pigs thanked the kids for saving them from the bad wolf. "Your house is
behind that bush", they told the kids. They found their house and went home and lived
happy ever after.
Thursday, November 1, 2012
Suddenly the Thunder ROARED! by Willie
Once
upon a time,along time ago there lived an father and his three glorious
children.They lived in a wooden house.The house was as tall as a
giraffe. One of the daughters went to read a story about the girl in the
Red Hood.The daughter was as cute as a cupcake.The oldest brother was as
brave as a Lion.
Suddenly the thunder ROARED.The father jumped with fear.Then the house turned into something strange. The daughter saw a bright face. It was as bright as the sun. The face belonged to a girl. The oldest brother fell in love with the girl and asked for her name. She said “ Little Red.”
A wolf howled . Red was in shock. She ran and they followed her. Red got to a small cottage and knocked on the door. Granny opened the door. Red jumped into the cottage and the others ran in. The wolf tore down the door but as soon as that happened the hot boiling water fell on him. He ran away and was never seen again. But the children stayed with Red and they all lived happily ever after.
Suddenly the thunder ROARED.The father jumped with fear.Then the house turned into something strange. The daughter saw a bright face. It was as bright as the sun. The face belonged to a girl. The oldest brother fell in love with the girl and asked for her name. She said “ Little Red.”
A wolf howled . Red was in shock. She ran and they followed her. Red got to a small cottage and knocked on the door. Granny opened the door. Red jumped into the cottage and the others ran in. The wolf tore down the door but as soon as that happened the hot boiling water fell on him. He ran away and was never seen again. But the children stayed with Red and they all lived happily ever after.
Tuesday, July 3, 2012
SIALE AND THE APPLE TREE By Willie
Once upon a time there
lived an intelligent boy called Siale. He was as intelligent as a scientist and
had good ideas like selling his hour. He lived in a poor house. The house was
small, but rather nice too. In the house it was tidy. Siale was getting poorer
and poorer because he had lost his job.
Suddenly Siale had no
choice but to sell his lawn mower. When he was almost at his Nana’s house he
saw an old man. The old man said, “Here are some apple seeds.” The old man looked
poor. He looked like he had come from the town. Siale gave the old man the lawn
mower and the old man gave him the apple seeds.
Siale raced home and
planted the seeds. The next day he opened his curtains and couldn’t believe his
eyes! He saw an enormous apple tree. He raced to get to the apple tree and when
he looked up he was amazed to see a big evil robot. The robot saw Siale and
wasn’t surprised at all.
The robot called his pet
dragon to kill Siale. But the dragon decided to be friends with Siale. The
robot tried to kill Siale with his laser eyes but the dragon jumped in front of
Siale and died. Siale was so frustrated that he cast a spell over the robot.
The robot gave all his money to Siale and hid in his castle in the tree.
Siale used the house to
buy a house. The house was as blue as the sea and as wide as a mountain! They
all lived happily ever after.
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