Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts
Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts

Wednesday, July 30, 2014

Kaitati's Homework Excuse

Here is Katiati's homework excuse, he has used go animate to publish it.

Homework Excuses

Last week we read a great book about homework excuses, then we wrote our own.  Demetrius has used go animate to publish his story and here it is.

Saturday, November 3, 2012

Lost in the Forest by Faamanu

Once upon a time there lived a nice and quiet family, Mum, Lucy, Dad and baby George. They lived in a  wooden house  with a big  giant clock.The clock always went  tic toc tic toc. One night  mum was reading a  story to the family near the fireplace. The  book she was reading  was  called, Little Red Ridding Hood. When she was reading the story the house started  turning into a forest with a wolf standing near a river. 
Mum said “what’s wrong  with our house?” Dad said “why are trees in our wooden house?” “Oh no!” shouted George.”Lets get out of here!” said Lucy.The family got lost in the forest.”How do we get out of here?” said Dad.
The family were searching their way out of the forest when they met a little girl called Little Red Riding Hood. The girl was so small and she was holding a picnic  basket.”This girl looks similar to the girl in a book,”  said Lucy. 
“Hi my name is Little Red Riding Hood” said the girl. 
“Hey she is Little Red Riding Hood in the story” said Lucy! 
"Help me, there's a wolf coming to eat me” replied Little Red. The wolf has sharp teeth and sharp claws and big muscles. "Can you help me,"  asked Little Red.” 
"Ok," said mum, "but if we help you would you help us?”
"Ok," said Little Red. When Little Red got home with Lucy’s family she saw her Grandma wrapped up inside the closest. The wolf jumped out of nowhere and tried to eat Lucy and Little Red. 
“Give me your picnic basket” roared the wolf. 
“No!” shouted Little Red and she threw the picnic basket to Lucy. Lucy ran to the wolf and whacked his head with the picnic basket and the wolf fell on the ground. 
“Are you going to help us or not” asked the mother. 
“Come with me and I will show you the way out of this place” said Little Red. Here is the place to help you get out of this spooky forest. 
“This is a cave”, said Dad.
“Come on” shouted Mum. “Let’s go”. 
The cave was spooky and so dark. Lucy ran inside and broke her ankle on a rock. Lucy felt hurt and she cried out loud to her Dad. So dad had to carry her all the way home. 
“Are you forgetting someone?" asked Little Red. "Can me and my grandma came with you?"  
“Sure you can" said mum. 
So they got out of the forest and they had a picnic and they lived happy ever after.      

Friday, November 2, 2012

The Big Bad Wolf by Jacob


Once there lived three kids. Their house was like a rich house and the kids names  were Jay Jay, Tloti and Jovan. One day they were looking at the fire and they could see people in the fire. Suddenly  the floor turned into a forest and they saw three pigs. They ran after them. Jovan the little boy looked sad so Tloti said, "come  on".  They came to the pig’s house. All  of the  kids went in one house to tell the pigs that the big bad wolf was coming. The wolf  was sad because he didn't get to eat the pig’s.  The pigs thanked the kids for saving them from the bad wolf.  "Your house is behind that bush", they told the kids. They found their house and went home and lived happy ever after.

Thursday, November 1, 2012

Suddenly the Thunder ROARED! by Willie

Once upon a time,along time ago there lived an father and his three glorious children.They lived in a wooden house.The house was as tall as a giraffe. One of the daughters went to read a story about the girl in the Red Hood.The daughter was as cute as a cupcake.The oldest brother was as brave as a Lion. 
Suddenly the thunder ROARED.The father jumped with fear.Then the house turned into something strange. The daughter saw a bright face. It was as bright as the sun. The face belonged to a girl. The oldest brother fell in love with the girl and asked for her name. She said “ Little Red.” 
A wolf howled . Red was in shock. She ran and they followed her. Red got to a small cottage and knocked on the door. Granny opened the door. Red jumped into the cottage and the others ran in. The wolf tore down the door but as soon as that happened the hot boiling water fell on him. He ran away and was never seen again. But the children stayed with Red and they all lived happily ever after.

Tuesday, July 3, 2012

SIALE AND THE APPLE TREE By Willie

Once upon a time there lived an intelligent boy called Siale. He was as intelligent as a scientist and had good ideas like selling his hour. He lived in a poor house. The house was small, but rather nice too. In the house it was tidy. Siale was getting poorer and poorer because he had lost his job.


Suddenly Siale had no choice but to sell his lawn mower. When he was almost at his Nana’s house he saw an old man. The old man said, “Here are some apple seeds.” The old man looked poor. He looked like he had come from the town. Siale gave the old man the lawn mower and the old man gave him the apple seeds.


Siale raced home and planted the seeds. The next day he opened his curtains and couldn’t believe his eyes! He saw an enormous apple tree. He raced to get to the apple tree and when he looked up he was amazed to see a big evil robot. The robot saw Siale and wasn’t surprised at all.


The robot called his pet dragon to kill Siale. But the dragon decided to be friends with Siale. The robot tried to kill Siale with his laser eyes but the dragon jumped in front of Siale and died. Siale was so frustrated that he cast a spell over the robot. The robot gave all his money to Siale and hid in his castle in the tree.


Siale used the house to buy a house. The house was as blue as the sea and as wide as a mountain! They all lived happily ever after.