Showing posts with label descriptive writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label descriptive writing. Show all posts

Monday, August 25, 2014

Monsters of the Deep, by Marshal

Marshal has written a powerful description of a Fangtooth. He has worked hard to include emotive vocabulary that paints a picture in the reader's head.

Tuesday, August 12, 2014

Kalo's Fish Description

Here is Kalo's description of a horrifying fish that lives down in the midnight zone.  What kind of fish do you think she is describing?

Monday, August 11, 2014

Sand Tiger Sharks

Here is Cerenity's description of a Sand Tiger Shark.  If you know something more about these sharks, leave Cerenity a comment to let her know.

 Sand Tiger sharks

In the sunlight zone there is a shark named sand tiger and it is very dangerous and it could bite you.Sand tiger sharks eat Mullets and squids.Sand tiger shark are the deadliest sharks in the ocean and people get scared of them. Most sand tiger sharks need to keep moving in the water to keep their blood flowing to stay alive.When people see sand tiger sharks they try to sprint away and the blood that flows through sand tiger sharks is warm blood. Sand tiger sharks have thin skin.

The Puffer Fish, By Taiala

Taiala has been doing some research on the puffer fish and used it to write a description.  She has used go animate to publish her work.

Wednesday, July 30, 2014

Kaitati's Homework Excuse

Here is Katiati's homework excuse, he has used go animate to publish it.

Homework Excuses

Last week we read a great book about homework excuses, then we wrote our own.  Demetrius has used go animate to publish his story and here it is.