Showing posts with label descriptive writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label descriptive writing. Show all posts
Monday, August 25, 2014
Monsters of the Deep, by Marshal
Marshal has written a powerful description of a Fangtooth. He has worked hard to include emotive vocabulary that paints a picture in the reader's head.
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fangtooth,
Marshal,
midnight zone,
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Tuesday, August 12, 2014
Kalo's Fish Description
Here is Kalo's description of a horrifying fish that lives down in the midnight zone. What kind of fish do you think she is describing?
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descriptive writing,
Kalo,
midnight zone,
ocean,
sea life
Monday, August 11, 2014
Sand Tiger Sharks
Here is Cerenity's description of a Sand Tiger Shark. If you know something more about these sharks, leave Cerenity a comment to let her know.
In the sunlight zone there is a shark named sand tiger and it is very dangerous and it could bite you.Sand tiger sharks eat Mullets and squids.Sand tiger shark are the deadliest sharks in the ocean and people get scared of them. Most sand tiger sharks need to keep moving in the water to keep their blood flowing to stay alive.When people see sand tiger sharks they try to sprint away and the blood that flows through sand tiger sharks is warm blood. Sand tiger sharks have thin skin.
Sand Tiger sharks
In the sunlight zone there is a shark named sand tiger and it is very dangerous and it could bite you.Sand tiger sharks eat Mullets and squids.Sand tiger shark are the deadliest sharks in the ocean and people get scared of them. Most sand tiger sharks need to keep moving in the water to keep their blood flowing to stay alive.When people see sand tiger sharks they try to sprint away and the blood that flows through sand tiger sharks is warm blood. Sand tiger sharks have thin skin.
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Cerenity,
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Sand Tiger Sharks
The Puffer Fish, By Taiala
Taiala has been doing some research on the puffer fish and used it to write a description. She has used go animate to publish her work.
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descriptive writing,
go animate,
puffer fish,
Taiala
Wednesday, July 30, 2014
Homework Excuses
Last week we read a great book about homework excuses, then we wrote our own. Demetrius has used go animate to publish his story and here it is.
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