Thursday, March 13, 2014

A Bad Day for Me at the War, by Falakiko

Falakiko has worked very hard to write and publish his story about being a soldier in WW1.  He has used google draw to publish his work and here is the finished result. 


11 comments:

Perenara said...

I like the way he thought about the picture that he was going to use.

Kensington said...

I like the way that he used the picture - at the end of the story he died and he got a picture of someone dying.

Starlyn said...

I like the way that Falakiko chose the characters to make them people that we know.

mounga said...

I like the way he used powerful words like survive

constance said...

great job Kiko

matthew said...

I like the way that you use powerful words.

cornelius said...

I like the way you add photos

Kaitati said...

It looks like me Kaitati is holding falakiko and siale is holding his gun.

melita said...

that is so cool falakiko.

tevita said...

that is cool.

Cerenity said...

Hi kiko i like you story because you put interesting works in your story.