I like the way you used the words comrades.
I like the way Jadaleigh was using powerful and interesting words for example, comrades, shocked, allies.
I like the way Jadaleigh wrote about her family, and put the picture of the people on the boat.
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I like the way Jada re-cheked her story.
Hi Jada i like your story and it looks cool.
I like the way you made a tittle
I like the way you had a picture in there that mashed the story.
I like the way you capital letters and full stops in the right place.
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I like the way you used the words comrades.
I like the way Jadaleigh was using powerful and interesting words for example, comrades, shocked, allies.
I like the way Jadaleigh wrote about her family, and put the picture of the people on the boat.
coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
I like the way Jada re-cheked her story.
Hi Jada i like your story and it looks cool.
I like the way you made a tittle
I like the way you had a picture in there that mashed the story.
I like the way you capital letters and full stops in the right place.
Post a Comment