Once upon a time there was
a princess. She was beautiful. One day she was playing with her crown but she
dropped her crown in the water. She started crying and a fish said to her, “Why
are you crying?” The princess said, “I dropped my crown in the water.” “Don’t
cry,” said the fish. “It’s all right, I will get your crown for you if you
marry me.” The princess said yes and the fish got the crown.
After ten years, the
princess fell in love with the fish because the fish could find things in the
sea like the money and jewelry.
The princess kissed the
fish and he turned into a man. She was happy and they got married again and
lived happily ever after.
5 comments:
Good work Trent but I think you have to put powerful words in your story
I love the way how the princess fell in love with the fish it was really romantic
Trent, I have loved reading your story about the Princess and the Frog. It has a beautiful ending. You kept me reading right till the end to see what happened. You are a wonderful story-teller. From Ms Hansell
Great story, Trent. When I was reading it I was wondering how it would end - you gave it a great ending!
good story Trent I love the way
that you used your punctuation in the
right place by: Kauri!!!
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