Tuesday, July 3, 2012

SIALE AND THE APPLE TREE By Willie

Once upon a time there lived an intelligent boy called Siale. He was as intelligent as a scientist and had good ideas like selling his hour. He lived in a poor house. The house was small, but rather nice too. In the house it was tidy. Siale was getting poorer and poorer because he had lost his job.


Suddenly Siale had no choice but to sell his lawn mower. When he was almost at his Nana’s house he saw an old man. The old man said, “Here are some apple seeds.” The old man looked poor. He looked like he had come from the town. Siale gave the old man the lawn mower and the old man gave him the apple seeds.


Siale raced home and planted the seeds. The next day he opened his curtains and couldn’t believe his eyes! He saw an enormous apple tree. He raced to get to the apple tree and when he looked up he was amazed to see a big evil robot. The robot saw Siale and wasn’t surprised at all.


The robot called his pet dragon to kill Siale. But the dragon decided to be friends with Siale. The robot tried to kill Siale with his laser eyes but the dragon jumped in front of Siale and died. Siale was so frustrated that he cast a spell over the robot. The robot gave all his money to Siale and hid in his castle in the tree.


Siale used the house to buy a house. The house was as blue as the sea and as wide as a mountain! They all lived happily ever after.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

WOW!Willie you have a huge imagination and it is so cool how you remade the tale of Jake and the Bean stork.
Great Job!!!

Charlottesweb said...

nice writing siale from kauri