Monday, September 8, 2014

Learning Conversations

In Room 4 we are always trying to give each other feedback and feedforward.  Here is a great conversation that took place between Diziah and Matthew about Matthew's writing.  Well done Room 4!


2 comments:

Judi Billcliff said...

Great to see you having a chat about your writing, and giving one another feedback. As a writer I know that editing is the most important thing you need to do. Edit, edit then edit again. Boring I know, but you'll be pleased when your writing looks good. I write mainly fun poems for kids, and love their feedback too. Good luck
Judi B
Rainbow Poetry

Diziah said...

Hi Judi this is Diziah thank you for the feedback that you gave me and Matthew about our work. Nice to here you.