Friday, November 1, 2013

Edith's Narrative

Once upon a time there was a dog and a owner. The dog's name is Bolt. Bolt is a fluffy dog and they lived in an enormous house by the beach  and the owners name was Becca. The dog's talent was that he could swim. One day Becca and Bolt went strolling to the beach. Bolt went for a swim but it was high-tide and Bolt almost drowned and Becca shouted "Oh no!" Bolt was swimming out but the current was too strong. The other dogs could not get out too. Bolt went real rough then Bolt helped all the dog's and got out. Everyone clapped and cheered then Becca and Bolt went home glad.

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